Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. Discuss both views and your own opinion.
It cannot be denied that there are numerous languages that are not in existence and this is happening about every year. While a growing number of people believe this trend has many benefits as less languages help people to understand each other more effectively, I reckon the loss of particular language also affect its culture and tourism, so drawbacks cannot be ignored. This essay will discuss both views with my own opinion.
On the one hand, due to stupendous growth in globalization, more people are acquiring others' languages; consequently, loss of their local language. When people travel for work or vacations they prefer to use language used by the destination place because it become comfortable for them to communicate and understand their culture. For instance, a research conducted by Himachal University suggests about 56 local languages of different villages in Himachal have no longer in use. With those languages, the culture associated with them also forgotten by people. It ultimately affects the tourism because when there will be nothing appealing in others' country then why will they come. Thus, if one state is facing such issue so there are numerous states and villages which are dealing with same problem of losing their native languages and tourism.
On the other hand, a section of society argues that the less number of languages provides great platform for people of different countries to interact with each other. People find it easy to share feelings and views when they get understand each other. In addition, it opens a way to do employment across the world while people demonstrate their skills to others more efficiently. In other words, people are more towards to apply their knowledge in different fields because they can contribute as they know the others' languages. Therefore, having less languages have many benefits such as easy understanding among people and employment opportunities.
To conclude, Although some individuals think less languages give opportunity to people to communicate with each other and develop healthy understanding; however, In my opinion the extinction of many languages have adverse ramifications that should be considered also.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun languages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...believe this trend has many benefits as less languages help people to understand eac...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...sed by the destination place because it become comfortable for them to communicate and...
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Line 9, column 548, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun languages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...the others languages. Therefore, having less languages have many benefits such as ea...
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Line 13, column 46, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun languages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...nclude, Although some individuals think less languages give opportunity to people to...
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Line 13, column 263, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ramifications that should be considered also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i reckon, in addition, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36781609195 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80398965285 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8111896387 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.533333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0666666667 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256439738394 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09597918507 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764088791112 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182206045425 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882995140964 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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