Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?
The planet is in crises like never before as the wildlife population around the world has decreased by a staggering fifty percent over the past five decades. This essay examines possible reasons for how we have collectively progressed to this bleak situation.
The United Nations has outlined 17 Sustainable goal strategies (SDGs) with SDG 11 focused around over consumption and production. Apart from many others, this may be identified as the root problem for the dwindling wildlife population as over poaching of wildlife has fuelled the luxury goods (furs and ivory), alternative eastern therapy medication ( bones used in preparation) & cosmetic industries ( animal plasma used as key active ingredient). Excessive aspirational wildlife tourism has also contributed to upsetting wildlife habitat.
Governments are privy to this degradation of wildlife populations but the greed of economic growth in the name of development and progress have allowed this to progress unhindered. There is a strong need for strong global intervention in terms of mandatory policy to curb and protect products and services that fully depend on wild life especially the endangered species which could completely get wiped out of this planet.
I do believe the UN SDGs should lead the mission by getting the top 100 countries in the world to commit to wildlife preservation charter or be faced with economic sanctions in trade. With a strong economic developmental mindset, linking sanctions to positive action is only way countries will unfortunately comply with the need of the hour.
This is a wake-up call for all humanity if we need to preserve the bio-diversity for generations to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38783269962 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96019031463 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653992395437 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4434870709 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.7 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20338641135 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805364863376 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839369891093 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103036313422 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761541265747 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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