Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years.
What can we do to help protect wildlife around the world?
Animals are an important part of the natural ecocycle. Recent studies suggest that there has been a 50% of decline in the number of wild animals in past five decades. I deem that this issue can be solved by taking some effective steps by government. This essay will discuss the possible solutions to overcome this problem.
First and foremost, government and authorities should pass some strict rules and regulations regarding wildlife conservation while stopping deforestation and development in wild areas as well as to conserve natural habitats. Illegal poaching and hunting of wild animals has become popular lately which is one of the main cause of decline of Rhino’s popilation in Africa. Thus, there should be saperate official body to stop and punish such criminals. At the same time, instead of expanding human residencial boundaries, governments ought to focus on building more high-rised buildings and infrastructures within the city limits.
Besides this, allocating a large budget for the scientific expriments for wildlife conservation is the need of an hour. Scientists need modern resources and infrastructure to research the problems behind the phenomenon of decline in wildlife population. To exemplify, Lion population in Geer Forest in India was on the verge of the extinction. But Indian government funded a team of scientists to resolve the problem and reacted proactively, as a result, India is on the tops the list of highest number of lions in a nation around the world.
In recapitulation, it is an undeniable fact that wildlife population has significantly reduces in last decades, but it can be solved by some proactive steps from authorities as well as strict rules and regulations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the highest'.
Suggestion: of the highest
...a result, India is on the tops the list of highest number of lions in a nation around the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, regarding, so, thus, well, while, as to, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31868131868 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06790060388 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8361734365 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107979423908 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031325220933 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342904534062 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0641584821529 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430261735244 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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