Science gives people life expectancy of close to one hundred years or even more. Some people view it in a positive light, but others believe it creates some problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Technology has increased the life period of human beings. The advancement of science has led to increase in the mortality of people around the world. some of us still think that living a longer life is endanger the life of others.
To begin with, Innovation in the filed of medicine has made human being stronger and healthier so that humans can live longer. In the early era, people used to eat healthy foods and lived a happy and long life. the advances in medication has found the solutions to all type of old age ailments and are trying to make a disease-free gene at the beginning age itself so that it can lead a healthy life without any hereditary diseases. There is saying that the old ones are wiser than the younger ones. Wisdom is learnt over time and by undergoing various tests of life.
Secondly, there are other sections of the community who think that dying early is far better than living at old age with ailments. The population is set to be at an increasing rate if the older generations are still alive while the younger generations are getting added rapidly. The resources which are meant for the present generation are also being used by the older ones leading to scarcity of resources across the world. The newer sections of people think that aged persons are a burden to the family or to the community.
Life span of an human is considered as an advantage if it is useful to others and not an upper hand if others think as a burden.so In my opinion I would consider that life expectancy should be more so that they transfer their wisdom to the younger generation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58391608392 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46016977603 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7726539478 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124385515039 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468037208714 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375095658912 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0839663064583 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393201652453 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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