Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Whether the government or private businesses can conduct scientific projects is still questionable among people. In my opinion, both sectors can do it because each one has a different advantage on its own.
On the one hand, I suppose that private corporations should be responsible for scientific inventions. First, those businesses do so well in funding scientific projects until projects are completed and flourished. For example, Elon Musk, a businessman who is the author of several spaceship-launching projects, failed many time due to unpredictable hardships of his projects. However, thanks to his funding from issuing stocks and bonds, he overcame the risk of bankruptcy and has become ahead in AI development field. Second, the owners of companies- related science and technology are often scientists, which means that they own their reputation in their areas and can easily attract talents for their projects. In fact, Tesla used to work for Edison and he invented the 2-dimension electricity during the time he was at Edison’s company.
On the other hand, there are various reasons why scientific research must be under the control of public sectors. Some inventions, such as nuclear weapons, are the national secrets and have tremendous effects on the global security. As a result, the government must control these inventions to ensure that they cannot be leaked out and held by terrorist forces. In terms of the medical area, experiments applied on human are often dangerous and debatable. Thus, medical research has to be done by the government with strict restrictions to protect people’s health and prevent exploiting human for immoral experiments.
In conclusion, discovery and research in science should be conducted by both private and public sectors because each sector has its own advantages. I suggest that the government should make a list of what projects that private companies can follow to reduce the confusion for the private sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, still, thus, well, as to, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36774193548 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96708267572 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9128803402 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.933333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240408501008 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768094359466 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697358604803 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14364265483 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492298141721 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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