Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believes that the scientific research should be supervised by the government instead of taken care by private organizations. And, I certainly concur with this kind of notion which will beneficial to the general public.
There are certain number of reasons to justify that national leaders should controlled scientific studies. The first and foremost reason is that the various research activities are carried out by private companies such as pharmaceutical firms to produce new medicine for a new kind of disease. Consequently, this leads to exclusive claim for the medication by a sole enterprise firm merely for the sake of economic commodity without offering an advantage to the public's health. In this case, the government should implement policies such as granting limited time for the company to product and sell the medication as well as adjusting it's price according to the everyone who needs to be cure.
Moreover, a plethora number of scientific projects are funded by the government which normally comes from the tax collection. Thus, the government ensures to not make this study a wasting money which is derived from public's money that can bring positive outlooks to our modern society. Apart from this, the government officials are only the ones who assess and approves the work of project that could be useful to a mankind in future. For instance, a corona test invented by an Indian pharmaceutical company in 2020 helps not only the residents of India but also the other countries due to huge demand and supply in the recent pandemic of Covid-19 virus. Therefore, government should monitor their every research project in the field of science and technology to keep a record to know how frequently the good outcomes are accomplished till now.
To conclude, I firmly agree that the role of government to control scientific researches is essential to ensure that all research findings is purely a benefit to community.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... of notion which will beneficial to the general public. There are certain number of reason...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...ty without offering an advantage to the publics health. In this case, the government sh...
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Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'everyone'?
Suggestion: the; everyone
...ell as adjusting its price according to the everyone who needs to be cure. Moreover, a p...
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Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...oject that could be useful to a mankind in future. For instance, a corona test invented b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16403785489 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80319369541 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589905362776 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6540927832 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.416666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0833333333 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253207017705 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905809088919 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737243384962 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162038270101 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350839487608 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.