Shopping is becoming more and more popular however some people feel this has both positive and negative effect
Why is shopping so popular
What are the positive and negative effect of the increased popularity of shopping
Shopping, as a free-time activity, is increasingly becoming popular likely due to peer pressure among people, and consequently, it is paying off with a booming economy. The economic growth is often cherished as a vast achievement for both people and the public, but there is also a downside which will be taken into account.
One primary cause of the rising popularity of shopping as a leisure activity is intense competition among people as they mostly do not like to be left out. In other words, many individuals may not have the intention of purchasing items, but because their families, friends and, perhaps, colleagues bought them, they also go shopping for similar materials, which satisfies their competitive urge. As a result, shopping is gradually and steadily becoming a habit of majority of the people, and hence, it is continually growing in popularity.
Although this development seems to be unintentional, it is positively affecting the people and the society in general. As more and more people are being enticed to patronize businesses and acquire varieties of items, ranging from wears to electronic gadgets, there tend to be a non-stop flow of transaction and money in the nation. Not only, therefore, are people getting employed by fast-rising business owners, but also is the community experiencing financial buoyancy, which is a good value to the economy.
However, the ascending popularity of shopping is sometimes detrimental to individuals and the public. The constant demand for people to purchase items at stores often result in spending intensively even as they are facing credit crunch. So, savings culture of many people is diminishing and they are now taking more personal loans from financial institutions, which is posing financial risks to not only the people but also the society.
In conclusion, shopping is growing due to influence among many individuals, and it is favouring the people and the public. It is, however, causing financial strain for them as they are being pressurised to keep spending money when most of them are not financially viable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, in general, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9278212357 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.8327055531 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.615384615 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21843927206 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789074308318 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484370996121 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112645364164 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329037018425 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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