At the out set of new millennium, education and healthcare have become a maiden requirement for everyone not only for getting good job or healthy body but also for slefrespect and protect world from from disease. It is stated that, individuals says academic and medical fertilizes should be free of charges and funded by the government, other people suggested that it should be responsibility of the citizens to pay for this services. Both statement are appropriate my complete agreements will be articulted in upcoming paragraphs before reaching to conclusion.
It is noteworthy mention that, education and healthcare services are basic need of every human being. So, government should provide fund and free of charge to these fertilizers. The main factor behind his circumstance is that it is hard for developing countries citizen to pay for these services. For Instance:- In Indian GOP rate is -27 its represent that half of India's population suffering from unemployment due to it is difficult for them to pay high enpenses to this services owing to education and healthcare fertilizers are very expensive than formative years. So, authorities must provide fund and full chaeckup fertilizers to people. Hence, it is enough to prove that why this method is important.
In addition to, the other reason beyond this is that. In developed countries people have enough money to pay these services. Due to they all are related with working sectors. For example:- In UK 93percent population engaged with working sector with excellent wages. They have money to pay for these services without facing any problem. Therefore it can be said that in developed countries it is responsibility of the people to pay for service.
To sum up, After the complete agreement from my mind, that government must be provide fund for developing countries and developed countries people should participate to pay for these services and this problem can be solved by whole.
- Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children To what extent do you agree or disagree Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer 56
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your opinion 61
- Improvements in health education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations However the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas To what extent do you agree or disagr 56
- Today most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they were younger Is it a positive or negative development in your own opinion To what extent do you support this development 56
- The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17721518987 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8849723073 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534810126582 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8196057261 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.503235114209 0.244688304435 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147398327066 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139072139182 0.0667982634062 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.315318337627 0.151304729494 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687233932627 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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