Should governments make decision about people's lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?
Ruling Authorities are generally responsible for making each and every decision of the country. A segment of society assert that, it is the responsibility of the state to make decision about its citizens way of living, whereas others have dissenting opinion and believe that individuals has to take their own decision. I think that government will make the best choice and result in better living standards of its public.
The predominant benefit is work timing. In various developed countries government fix the maximum working hour per week, nobody is legally allowed to work more than maximum hours. For example, international students pursuing higher education in Canada or Australia are not permitted to work beyond 20 hours per week. If a person is left free to work as many hours as desire, they will only run after money and will ruin their health and family. Therefore, this interference of state in deciding the working time of its people will definitely help them to work and life balance.
Another reason, authorities decision on health and safety is beneficial in numerous ways. Proper research has been carried out in order to control the spread of many diseases, which leads to development of healthy nation. Considering the example of Polio Vaccination in India, which is provided free of cost to all the young children's. Moreover government also organise champs to spread awareness among people. Hence, state decision on medical treatment is also boon for the society.
In conclusion, government has to make the decision regarding its citizens lifestyle, because it will lead to the best path and nation's growth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, whereas, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18113207547 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71203428066 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9547861588 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220806321711 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677579172631 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686074205778 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142397946964 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874067776304 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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