The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
It is a popular notion that people tend to observe and follow other people’s choices. This is commonly reflected in fashion clothes and consumer goods. This essay agrees with this concept and explains further about the psychological human behavior.
Human beings are social animals and tend to be in groups. As a result, they are highly influenced by each other’s behavior and choices. Any trend introduced in the society either by people considered as role models or via social media gains popularity and is opted by most of the people. This is more common in young people. For example, in colleges, majority of youngsters are seen flaunting fashionable clothes. Any newcomer in the college will attempt to follow the current fashion trend to attain acceptance among other students. Overall this tendency to gain acceptance in social groups drives people to copy others. Similarly apart from clothes people tend to use products which are commonly used and accepted by the majority. For example, a decade back every Indian household exhibited television boxes. But these days these are being replaced by LED versions. Any new buyer is not opting to buy the television box set since these are considered as outdated. Another example is the sale of cars. A certain brand of car (Maruti) is more popular among Indians and buying it is considered a smart choice. Whenever a person goes to the market to but a commodity he often seeks other people’s advice and chooses the most favored product.
However not all people tend to follow the masses. These are the people who make their own decisions and often try to experiment in life. For instance, fashion designers who go by their own fashion. But such people form a very small section of the society and are mostly seen as the trend setters. Similarly very few people can be seen not using or minimally using consumer goods in spite of being wealthy enough.
To conclude people often seek approval from each other. This behavior is confirmed when people are seen following the current fashion trends or buying the popular products in the market. There is a forever attempt by the people to not to look or feel outdated in any aspect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, similarly, so, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95675675676 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51673725264 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52972972973 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6782748825 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.36 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148664997228 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439262861907 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541844648596 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983873625743 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460563570309 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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