Smacking children is the best from of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days it has become difficult to discipline children. Some people believe that the best way to teach children discipline is by physical punishment. This essay will argue that smacking children is totally unacceptable and will elaborate the reasons why I disagree with it.
Those parents who think of various ways to discipline their children claim that smacking children. People as parents always need to monitor children’s behavior, and try to educate them in the physical way. Moreover, in traditional families, they used discipline children to get good manners by authority. This does not promote trust between adults and children. For example, some parents used to physical punishment to prevent them doing impolite behaviors. Therefore, children can be disciplined by parents within physical punishment, but it also makes them scared to make mistakes.
On the other hand, corporal punishment creates an atmosphere of fear and anger. Children who are punished physically may become shy or resentful. Furthermore, children might be affected by the fear of punishment and they will be afraid of making mistakes. For instance, they will fear telling parents that they failed their exam in school. It not only changes their attitude facing the failure, but also makes them choose to be dishonest. All things considered, the statement that corporal punishment is the best way to discipline children is completely unacceptable.
To sum up, this essay has argued that smacking children is inappropriate while some people still believe physically punishing children. In my opinion, physically punishing children is definitely not the correct method to discipline them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51550387597 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85723068748 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554263565891 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.0930118701 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.7058823529 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1764705882 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221757747684 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850977961462 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590001073351 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161235796598 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576383166232 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.14 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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