Social media is becoming increasingly popular among all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Nowadays, social communication is more and more widespread among all age groups, which lead to information spread commonly on online foundation. Therefore, people may show another data or keep in touch with other ones flexibly. Nevertheless, draw back of that is privacy shared, which makes users have risks.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that developing online communication brings the huge amount of merits. First of all, it can help someone to keep in touch with family and friends. To be more specific. the availability of advanced technology helps people contact with friends who travel abroad. For instance, media websites like Facebook owns 100 million profiles all over the world, which make conversations among all countries become simple. Furthermore, equipping remote school with more computers could make education accessible to the countryside students. To put anyway, children, who live in outskirts or in mountains may spend much time and money on studying courses in urban. however, learning on social foundation can be the solution of that trouble.
On the other hand, I am also favor of the disadvantages of social media. To begin with, people who spend most of daily time surfing the internet are likely to suffer from social isolation. To put it simply, this is since users always sit in front of computer screens, rarely do people hang out with their friends and share emotions each other. Secondly, it is dangerous that individual information is spreading popularly. To be more specific , celebrities' document like diary or pictures are watching by inhabitants around the world. Consequently, their life can be threatened and the income may be reduced.
To be recapitulate briefly, social network has may merit which improve the quality of life. However, people who use that should have security by avoiding virus software.
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- Social media is becoming increasingly popular among all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. 78
- Social media is becoming increasingly popular among all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, briefly, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, no doubt, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77846067108 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6748543626 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8947368421 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6315789474 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1052631579 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212208410065 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561147543611 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672080741872 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127355728058 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294099483031 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.