In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion on this?
Safety of the youth is of prime concerns in the current era. In a few selected areas in the US a curfew has been levied on the youth. According to some people this restriction is certainly justified however, according to others it is totally uncalled for. I am definitely f the opinion that this ban on the youngsters is totally justified as, it is not a total ban, but a partial ban. Wherein, a teenager is free to venture out at night along with an adult. In the following essay I will further validate my views with credible examples.
The most compelling reason according to me, for holding to my above mentioned view that teenagers need not go out late at night without a parent or guardian for their safety only. As in today’s times the escalating rate of nocturnal crime like pedophilia, knife-point mugging, unsafe sex, drug abuse and bacchanal parties which are particularly occurring in the darker, lonelier and desolate time of the night which are totally unsafe are influencing the youth in a bad way. Even if, the Police is patrolling they cannot assess, what is happening behind closed doors. For example, To resolve this problem government of California was among the first cities to claim curfew success, to publicly endorse the idea at the local high school. From there, this concept spread like wildfire and remain in place decades later.
Another valid reason in support of my stance, is the concern of the parents who have witnessed the amount of distress or suffering that a teenager goes through. Even for once, after having faced an ordeal in the form of molestation, date rape, mugging, stabbing. It may take ages, a lot of Rehabilitation, a lot of counselling to help the youth come out of spells of depression or agony of being violated for no obvious fault of theirs. For example, In the U.S., approximately 100,000 young people experience psychosis each year. So for parents who feel prevention is any day better than cure, moreover, they have highly appreciated this kind of reduction in the amount of menace on a regular basis
To encapsulate, I would further like to reinstate my faith in the judiciary as well as the parents who are coming up with such laws in today’s times expressing concern just to ensure and safeguard their precious children’s present and their future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...otally unsafe are influencing the youth in a bad way. Even if, the Police is patrolling they...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1940.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88664987406 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75031599691 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60201511335 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.3748344369 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8125 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237375047724 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622478910843 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541101703736 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124786820244 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497044211326 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.