At the outset of new millennium, academic work is maiden requirement for every student not only to get knowledge but also to score superficial marks in exams. Some individuals believe homework is pivotal equipment in every tolddlers life however, other have different view. I partially agree with this statement as well as my partial agreement will be articulated in upcoming paragraphs before reaching to conclusion.
It is noteworthy to mention that, "Education is Key to success". The main factor behind this circumstances is that homework connect students with thier academics. Furthermore, homework is only a weapon which encourage students to clear their doubt by themself rather then depends on other. For instance, in 2020 UK survey defined that with the help of giving homework to children, it prove the ways to them to inhance their productivity rate and it shows a increase of 80 precent from last ten years. Consequently, it would also engaged students to do more hard work to competite with their other counter parts. Therefore, it is enough to prove that why homework have cardinal role in children life.
On the unitary hard, why homework is not pivotal ? because children not getting enough time to do other activities. In addition to this, academic also posing a trend to their holistic development. To cite an example, world health reports shows that, if students are only engaged with their studies, it badly effecting their health. Due to toddlers not getting proper time to do physical work. Moreover, they spending 7-8 hours on school and rest time opproximately 4-5 hours with completing their homework to get good grades. As a result, this trend is not positive for children to only focus on study rather then focusing on other activities. Hence, it is clear that by homework effecting youngsters life.
To sum up, schools should also prefer children overall development rather than only focus on academics. Toddlers must arrange time to other activities also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, in fact, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1826625387 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82017034382 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585139318885 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7503037733 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1052631579 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117527424187 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399621741187 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379270287626 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760006371336 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177942121312 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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