Some children have friends that can influence them. What do you think parents should do about it? Give your own opinion and examples.
Nowadays, parents have given so much relaxation to their kids that they have no idea what they doing behind them. This has led some children to have bad company while growing up, which later could effect in their life. Although, it is not healthy for a kid to be monitored 24 hours by their parents but it is most likely possible for parents to have good relation with kids. In my opinion, parents should have balance relation with their kids.
To begin, many parents get so much strict on their kids, that it ended them to hide things from them. In order words, parents kind of isolate their kids, they don’t allow them to do anything they like and only focus in their studies. As a result, those kids start keeping secrets from them about their lifestyle, friends and things. These children start hanging out in a wrong company and ended up getting introduced into drugs. According to a recent study, most criminals have bad and rough childhood. For these reasons, it will not be wrong to say that parents should not be too strict on their love ones.
Conversely, there are many parents, who keep a very friendly and balance relationship with their kids. They tend to make them their friends so that in any problem, they approach them and seek help rather then hiding from them. It is believed that if you give enough time to your kids, they end up with confidence, intelligent and obviously tend to understand good or bad. Therefore, it is a duty of a parent to raise kids by giving them more time and monitor their friends and activities.
To conclude, parents should be friendly and caring towards their kids so that they share most things with them to prevent themselves from having bad company rather then being strict, as it will end up making the kid hide stuff.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...any while growing up, which later could effect in their life. Although, it is not heal...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...they approach them and seek help rather then hiding from them. It is believed that i...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...emselves from having bad company rather then being strict, as it will end up making ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, so, then, therefore, while, kind of, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6582278481 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23670384618 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1366246297 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235762383466 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909956171102 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445248728377 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155062885151 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430074845977 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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