some cities do not restrict on how stylish and unique houses and offices that people construct can be. do the advantages outweight the disadvantages
In recent decades, there has been a growing debate that whether the government should limit the kind of buildings that can be built or not. While the idea that people can erect every style of house they want seems to be reasonable, ample evidence suggests the opposite. I partially agree with the latter view and in this essay, both sides of the argument will be discussed.
On one hand, various kinds of buildings in a city will create a colorful urban landscape. In other words, its beauty can attract visitors from other places. For example, Ha Noi which is a beautiful city with a wide range of houses style from traditional to modern had attracted many guests to come and visit. Furthermore, the more design customers need, the more jobs it will create. That is to say, to construct a house needs the effort of many construction works and house designers. The more weird a construction would be, the more employee it will need.
On the other hand, a street with all kinds of dwellings might look like a mess. Due to the permission of the government, the city may lose its grave view. For instance, an ancient temple or church may have to lie down next to a circus which will reduce its formality. In addition, the citizen’s unique style might be dangerous for the neighborhood. To illustrate this point, in 1980 the was a man who built his house to look like an upside-down pyramid and two months after that the building fall down and cause the death of five people.
I have discussed both sides of the argument and given my opinions. Although the uncommon house styles may rise the outlook of the city and reduce unemployment, I still believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages because of the danger and chaos it may cause.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56463708609 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574675324675 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4400451707 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169698144484 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519111203534 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454466520279 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981181486523 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297647788772 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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