Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think this is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There are a huge number of promotion methods which many entities use in order to introduce their services or goods. supporting sports as one of the most significant way has always been popular among them. Although some people believe that this is a reasonable trend and some people have an opposite opinion, it can be helpful.
In the past century and when the industrialization was going at a fast pace, competition between the companies boosted. Then, entities started to encourage people to purchase their products by advertising. they use all sources and state-of-the-art methods such as promotion in newspaper, TV or radio, and bulletins. they also use sports as a powerful way to impact people in especial youth and children. Nowadays, this way is still popular because it can change the needs, however some people are not the supporters.
On the one hand, some people think that backing up sports teams and athletes are useful owing to two reasons. Firstly, physical activity will be more comfortable and cheaper, if companies sponsor a sport team. because by earning some money from an entity for wearing a shirt which is printed by its trade mark, clubs can invest in sports activities and pay more their athletes. Secondly, printing or announcing an advertisement in media will be waste money, however people see it because it cannot be effective.
On the other hand, some people argue that supporting sports by companies cannot be useful. sport has an intact spirit and commercial advertisements adversely affect it. people have regular exercise in order to have a better physical condition and prevent obesity. especially many products have negative aspects. For instance, supporting a local team by a fast food cannot be meaningful.
In conclusion, people have their idea about backing up sports by firms. some people believe that this trend can aid people, firms and sport activities, while some people have a different idea but companies can persuade people to buy their products and do sport by advertisements.
- Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think this is good, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
- Some people think that teenagers should follow the example of older people. Others think that it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to living in a big apartment building. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Supporting
...r to introduce their services or goods. supporting sports as one of the most significant w...
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Suggestion: They
...purchase their products by advertising. they use all sources and state-of-the-art me...
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Suggestion: They
... newspaper, TV or radio, and bulletins. they also use sports as a powerful way to im...
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Suggestion: Because
...per, if companies sponsor a sport team. because by earning some money from an entity fo...
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Suggestion: Sport
...g sports by companies cannot be useful. sport has an intact spirit and commercial adv...
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Suggestion: Especially
...physical condition and prevent obesity. especially many products have negative aspects. Fo...
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Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18429003021 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81389734584 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549848942598 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0343717257 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3157894737 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286726578877 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859767112645 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822293346591 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167976560664 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357303757615 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.