It is necessary for parents to attend a parenting training course. Do you agree or disagree?
education from the cradle to the grave has always been the most significant matter in children’s life. Although they learn many skills in schools before adolescence, their parents act a prominent role and their behavior is vitally important. governments should provide some courses to educate parents before time that their child is born in order to security of the society and better treat.
Needless to say, a community consists of a number of people who play their acts and it can be hurt by misbehavior done by some people. To prevent cruelty and decrease the crime rate trained parents by classes which are carried out by government are essential. they will be educated even one immorality action can adversely affect children’s spirit and the society will be in danger. As a developed country in this subject is the case in point. people want to get married in this country ought to pass some courses before and after marriage. As a consequence, the rate of safety is high and the jail are without many prisoners.
also, parents have not learnt how to manage their actions in order to nurture. Childhood is divided into three stages and each step has a different word with various requirements. Not only common citizens without a higher level of education, but also high-educated parents have not learnt the differences between these periods. For instance, a teenager needs independence while an enfant looks for support. In the end, fathers and mothers will be taught to foster their children.
To recapitulate, since societies are made from people, authorities need to look after the generations. Furthermore, scientific fostering is not clearly known by many parents. Obviously then, parenting training course is one of the most significant ways to supervise and improve people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...irit and the society will be in danger. As a developed country in this subject is ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20819112628 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83224223155 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621160409556 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3798097006 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7647058824 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70588235294 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132151651215 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401277863719 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510212294086 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081605432052 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228062242622 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.