In some countries fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to schools to promote their product. Do you think it’s a positive or negative development?
Localized businesses such as hotels and shopping-malls sometimes donates money to educational institutions for the sake of promotion. While some people might consider this act preposterous, I, however, believe that the drawbacks are eclipsed by the advantages which I will present in subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, Money donated by these businesses helps in the development of schools, which otherwise would not have been possible by government funds. This means that the funds allocated by government can merely be used to cover the expenses leaving no possibility for expansion. Coca Cola, for example, took the responsibility for maintenance of schools in Sindh some of which were in devastated condition. Additionally, local companies sponsor events such as sports tournaments and science projects fair in institutions which leads students to exposure and help them groom for future by taking part in these contests.
Secondly, this advertising stunt also provide information about latest products to adolescence and families which help them better reach their desired product. For example, Unilever promoted safeguard soup by conducting school to school tour and giving free samples and brochures to children providing information about anti-bacterial soup so that families understand its need. Furthermore, by the expansions of these small companies, society benefits overall as they increase job opportunities and new choices such as latest products and dining options, as it is always considered better to have variety of options available to choose from. For example, it is better to have food choices like Chinese, Turkish or Italian, rather than just desi food.
In conclusion, by promoting products in school, not only the companies benefits by better reaching customers but also society gets facilitated by constructional expansion of schools, new events and increment in available jobs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69337979094 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03998532275 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637630662021 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6479860908 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.545454545 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128852572918 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469688193588 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308639267107 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726457567488 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296031103328 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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