In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this king of food.
Agree or Disagree
Few countries rise number of pupils who suffering from health diseases for taking high amount of fast food. So Government should leavy a tariff on junk food. This essay agrees that a higher rate of tax should be paid by fast food companies. Firstly, this essay will discuss the fact that alcohol and tobacco companies already pay higher taxes could raise prices and lower consumption.
Higher tax on liquire and aggretts has proven to be successful at curbing the harm caused by these substances. This earring has been used to treat health problems associated with these products and has proven useful in advertising camping warning people about the danger of alcohol and tobacco abuse. Tax from fast food could be used in the same way. The United Kingdom is a prime example , where money from smokers is used to treat lung cancer and heart problem, While at the same time, pumped into health campaigns in school warm children about the dangers of smoking.
Increasing taxes would be raise in prices and let down the consumption many fast food companies would be pay high taxes to consumers in the from of higher prices and the result is people not being able to afford high amount or expensive junk food. So fast food would soon become a luxury item and it would only be consumed occasionally which would be less harmful to the general public’s health. For instance, the cast of organic food has proven prohibites expensive for most people and that is why only a small percentage of the population but it regularly.
In conclusion, Junk food should be taxed at a higher rate because of the good precedent set by alcohol and tobacco and the fact that the increased cost should reduced the amount of fast food people buy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76923076923 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34568161143 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52508361204 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1548246094 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.833333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330186274281 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135933151008 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698251936262 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21169931989 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654858526417 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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