The bar chart so the score of team A, B and see over four different seasons.
The given bar graph illiterate the point of different teams such as teams A, B and see from the year 2002 to 2005
Overview, it can be seen that team B got highest points in all the seasons and team a obtain low point in first two seasons and team C acquired lowest score compare to other team in between the year 2004 and 2005.
initially, tim a was very low score in the season of 2002. which was five points. However, the highest points in the table was taken by tim be compare to all the years point of all teams. which was 82 points at 2002‘s season. In the year 2003, team be obtained again more score in between three teams. In addition, that score was 60 points. Furthermore, teams reached 15 points in the year of 2003.
In the year 2004, the score of team a high increased compare to last two years point. And, which reached 35 points in the graph. More ever, TB points was 43.
In the year 2005 the team a point was it team B acquired 55 points and team C score was 5 point.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'got the highest'.
Suggestion: got the highest
...5 Overview, it can be seen that team B got highest points in all the seasons and team a ob...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hest points in all the seasons and team a obtain low point in first two seasons a...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...hest points in all the seasons and team a obtain low point in first two seasons and team...
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Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'acquired the lowest'.
Suggestion: acquired the lowest
...w point in first two seasons and team C acquired lowest score compare to other team in between ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Initially
...eam in between the year 2004 and 2005. initially, tim a was very low score in the season...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: A_WAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...e year 2004 and 2005. initially, tim a was very low score in the season of 2002. w...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...s very low score in the season of 2002. which was five points. However, the highest p...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s very low score in the season of 2002. which was five points. However, the highest p...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...re to all the years point of all teams. which was 82 points at 2002‘s season. In the ...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re to all the years point of all teams. which was 82 points at 2002‘s season. In the ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15025906736 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04753046461 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466321243523 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 78.7352719914 43.030603864 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.75 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204972364281 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809278994599 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803940750899 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156349213289 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676419298242 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.2329268293 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 97.53 61.2550243902 159% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 10.3012195122 35% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 11.4140731707 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.74 8.06136585366 71% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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