In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.
A good accomodation is a primary requirement whether it is a rented or owned. However, nowadays, there is a trend of renting living spaces rather than investing to buy. Let us focus on the benefits and drawbacks of renting.
Many people choose rented houses because of the convenience it provides. Specially newly married couples opt this. One reason for this is because settlement is very fast and easy when someone want to change their accomodation. Moreover, there are abundance of available units to select with plethora of amenities. In addition, lesser maintenace, repair burdens and easy relocation are other advantages. There are real-estate agents who handles the legal formalities for both tenent and owner providing exceedingly easy moving in and outs. Many high rise apartment buildings and condominiums are being built in every city to cater for the high demand of rented living.
However, despite the benefits, there are some significant drawbacks. The prime example is the lack of legal ownership of the house. To illustrate, people pay exponential amount of rental money for these rented accomodations without having any long term benefits. If they invest that money to build their own house, their future would be more stable in terms of accomodation. In contrast, renting is just providing a temporary satisfaction. Unfortunately, many young people do not realise this and they tend to live in rented houses quite long time wasting good amount of money. Admittedly, living in your own house is giving more freedom and satisfaction compared to rented living, which is extremely important when family is growing and getting older.
To recapitulate, renting can be really beneficial when relocating and starting a new family life, however, by analysing the long term drawbacks and making the right decisions on right, time people can get the maximum advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, so, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32775919732 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85115438554 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622073578595 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5337346113 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6111111111 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176382593008 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514578016319 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542130870725 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105917250995 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526009499727 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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