In some countries, the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the increasing crime rate, large part of the population prefer having weapons like gun, sword with them or at their residence for personal or family safety. In my opinion, having guns might give rise in number of criminal cases like murders, shoot-outs however, a complete restriction on having weapons at home might not reduce the shooting issues.
Keeping weapons at home give an easy access to use them irrespective of severity of events i.e. even if a small fight happens with someone, people might use weapons to over-power. Most people not only use the weapon for safety but also to demonstrate social power, status and thus carry weapons at public places and can use them at their own discretion.
Though, having a weapon at home bring more security to people and make them self-dependence. The government allows possession of weapon for personal in army, police services, affluent class people or if anyone who is getting regular threat calls. The weapons help them to secure themselves from any unplanned event at market place or a terror threat at home. For example Managing Director, big businessmen carry weapons or posses one at home for their safety as they are more vulnerable to attacks. Hence, In today's we cannot completely ignore the importance of having weapons. And if we do put a restriction on having a weapon at home, people will find out way to procure it from illegal weapon manufacturer or suppliers, who exist in market and supply unregistered weapons at a very low cost. This might lead to increase in trade of illegal weapons simultaneously, increasing risk of shooting.
Concluding the above argument, I believe that allowing possession of weapons at home trigger increase in shooting cases thus government should monitor issuance of weapons cases on case basis with proper assessment of situation. Also, while issuing the license to carry the weapons proper documentation need to be done which have record of type of gun issued, number of bullets given so on and so forth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...ssues. Keeping weapons at home give an easy access to use them irrespective of severity of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02686567164 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69824328386 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576119402985 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2200405905 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.538461538 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191190981373 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827148819387 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424297921617 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130987194199 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439211063321 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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