Do you think that the place where the person grew has an influence on his accomplishments? Explain with example.
A person’s achievement always depends on his efforts and Hard work and I don’t think that the place where he brought exerts one’s achievements, let’s see below the example of persons from both urban and rural areas.
Firstly, to talk about the attainments of person grown up from rural area, I have seen many people who suffered for their basic needs such as food, shelter and clothes, they also had no educational background but they wanted their children to become professionals like doctors, engineer’s, architect’s and so on. They endured the pain to give their children the quality education by joining them in the best educational institutions where the adults realized the pain of their parents and attained greater heights in career. A pure example for this is, Dr. A.P.J.Abdu Kalam who was born and brought at a small village in Rameshwaram who dedicate concentrated in his studies and attained several accomplishments that made his parents proud of him, he was not only the scientist but also the “Missile Man” of India which indeed brought Pride to our Nation.
On the other side,I have also seen people from rural areas who was able to meet their goals with their own potential though they have been with all the requirements that they need to find out. For instance, Mukesh Ambani from Reliance group, has all abundant prosperity to attain anything he required but the creative ideas on him took him to the next level by introducing Jio network in India. He could have spent his lifetime using the treasures of his ancestors instead he put his attempt to accomplished goals in the life.
To conclude, it is very clear that only the place where a person grew doesn’t impact his accomplishments but this will be also one of the important factor for one’s achievements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 20.9802955665 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09900990099 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91730507295 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.5024630542 180% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.511449381 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 193.125 104.977214359 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.875 20.9669160288 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15491960403 0.242375264174 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742515385151 0.0925447433944 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061504086157 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115927140431 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489181095267 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 12.6369458128 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.9458128079 151% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 55.0591133005 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.3980295567 162% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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