In some countries, some people are renting accommodation, while others are buying their own homes. Does renting accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantages than buying a place?
Home is where the heart is!
In certain nations, few people are leasing temporary homes, while others are possessing permanent homes. The forthcoming paragraphs, illustrates if the rented living space is more beneficial or not in comparison to the owned space.
With the increase in urban population and large number of people migrating to cities for better lifestyle and most importantly for work, housing has become very expensive. With the inorganic boom in the real estate, owning a living space remains a dream for many. The financial stress on an individual is lesser while renting the house in comparison to buying one, large sum of money as a down-payment is not required; thereby it becomes easier to handle the burden. Also, in the modern world, people prefer to move jobs and explore new places than living in the same house and place, temporary rented place is best suited in such cases.
On the other hand, owning a space gives us a sense of belonging and is an investment. The emotional connect with the own house is immeasurable; the pride of ancestral house when passed on over generations is invaluable, all of this would not be possible with the leased space.
Overall, the major upside to renting a living space is affordability with minimum financial burden and flexibility to relocate. On the downside, it is an expense with zero returns, the emotional connect to the place is negligible. Considering both the sides I think, with the modern lifestyle and demanding jobs people are always on the move also, allocating large part of the earning for accommodation alone makes it impossible to explore other interests of an individual like travel. Hence, the leased property has an edge over buying a property
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, while, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0553633218 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73170625848 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6710013777 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19507102343 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706788935708 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458370866271 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10095529952 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760542141183 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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