The company you’re working offers funds and required things to the groups of local community every year. Write a letter to the director of your company to recommend a group in your local community which deserves help.
In your letter, you should:
describle what the group is
say how your company funds can help them
explain why helping them is a good idea.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing you, recommending a group in my society for the annual funds that the company offers.
It is group of volunteers who work closely with the workers in the various labour camps in and around the city, they organise regular sessions for them concentrating primarily on the local laws, rights, health and safety.
In recent time, the group wanted to organise a basic health checkup which includes reading of blood pressure, blood sugar and heart rate level of an individual along with the blood donation in the labour camp with more than 500 employees. On releasing the funds, it would benefit the above cause.
Although, the group is fairly new, I have seen their enthusiasm to serve and the honesty with which they organise events. Also, from the CSR (Corporate Social Responsibility) view, it is a good thought to support them.
I will be looking forward for a positive response from you.
Thanks
Yours Sincerely
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11949685535 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52220862175 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1209920897 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168835231157 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706689436606 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651594621813 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087379966788 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073869673736 0.0580467560999 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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