Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants.Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?
Food industry contributes 30% to the global economy. With the fast paced life, people prefer meal take-away’s or eating out, depending upon their schedule and usually end up wasting a part of their meal. In the below paragraphs we elaborate on this insensitive social behavior and the possible solutions to bring down the food wastage.
A recent study showed that, if the annual food wasted in the United States of America is to be quantified, it would suffice to feed one meal over a period of one year to the entire continent of Africa. This analysis is only the 'tip of the iceberg'. Also World Health Organisation (WHO), came up with a shocking statistics in 2017 revealing that the primary reason for juvenile death in the world, by 2050 would be hunger. Both the above statements are true and very contradicting, on one side we see people wasting food and on the other side people die because of hunger.
The primary reason for food wastage is, people acting blindfold to the real social issues of the world. Nobody wants to work for a social cause, for example: a student in the developed country is not thinking of the problems a socially and economically backward country has. Society is thinking in the lines of Darwin’s theory of ‘Survival of the fittest’.
Few measures to decrease the food wastage are, to educate the people on the real world issues like hunger, making children socially responsible, being empathetic towards one another. Large corporate to have control on mass production of food products, Government bodies penalizing the restaurant/fast food chains for food wastage.
Finally, food wastage is a real concern in most of the developed and developing countries, unless we the people of this society or the last link in the chain of consumer driven economy, don’t act responsibly, and take charge of the issue, no local bodies or multinational companies can do anything about it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0652173913 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85894488136 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0499183646 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.461538462 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262718431238 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902764684458 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595504192244 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14469788142 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450566926279 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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