Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this? Is the best solution to traffic congestion?
Developed countries are spending money and encouraging people to start using alternative transportations, one of it is bicycle. There are many reasons why they are using a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier, and this will introduce many solutions and change people lives positively.
On one hand, many reasons let governments to work and emphasize that these money are spent to make bicycle usage life easier. First, people are wasting and spending their time stuck in traffic and can't move easily in the city. Number of cars is increasing gradually, no areas to park and parking fees is expensive. Moreover, rate of air and noise pollution is increasing and affecting negatively on the citizens health. For example, the Ministry of Transportation in Lebanon, showed a study that 200000 vehicle each day enter to the capital, due to lack of means of transportation especially bicycles.
On the other hand, many solutions can be found to solve traffic congestion, the best and environmental way is riding a bicycle. Moving on a bicycle will facilitate people lives where they can move easily in the cities. They will avoid congestions especially in the busiest areas, employees will reach their work on time and less fatigue. People life will change positively, stress level and body pains caused from driving the car will reduce, additional to decreasing in pollution and less diseases, where people will have a green and healthy life. For example, in Amsterdam most of its citizens move on bicycle and it's their own transportation, where it assist them to avoid traffic and gain time.
As a conclusion, governments in developed countries, are spending money on a solution that help their people to have a healthier life. That's why, all people must start using bicycles, first to help their environment, themselves to stay fit and avoid traffic congestion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
... governments to work and emphasize that these money are spent to make bicycle usage life ea...
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Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...pending their time stuck in traffic and cant move easily in the city. Number of cars...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'citizens'' or 'citizen's'?
Suggestion: citizens'; citizen's
...reasing and affecting negatively on the citizens health. For example, the Ministry of Tr...
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Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun diseases is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ditional to decreasing in pollution and less diseases, where people will have a gree...
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Line 5, column 617, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ost of its citizens move on bicycle and its their own transportation, where it assi...
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Line 5, column 656, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assists'?
Suggestion: assists
... its their own transportation, where it assist them to avoid traffic and gain time. ...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... their people to have a healthier life. Thats why, all people must start using bicycl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12091503268 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83244364136 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2897759631 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.928571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245158480379 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809353821795 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090802390387 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160719014431 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105509622856 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.