In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
In this modern era, there is an ongoing deliberation among people on having a ‘gap year’ between high school and university studies. Some people argue that the disadvantages overweigh the advantages, on my point of view this gap year give both advantages and disadvantages to students in their future life.
First and foremost, students can use this time either for studies or for travelling. For instance, students can use this time for relaxation and to experience the world while acquiring kowledge on different aspects. Apart from that, they can use this time to get ready to for their next endaveour because they may not have sufficient time to relax once they start studying. However, students can get used to the work environment and also get hand on experience if they start working during this period. At the same time, they can save some money for their future studies as well.
On the other hand, during the gap year, there is a possibility of losing interest on studies because they do not involve in studies on regular basis. In addition, if someone spend time on travelling and working others would continue their higher studies and enter into the job market earlier than them. Some students might forget the subject matters and they will feel isolated in their respective study area.
In conclusion, it is recommended students to take a break between high school and university because it gives more advantages to life. It is also believed, that students can acquire knowledge and experience duringthis time period which could be a definite benefit in their future life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ing deliberation among people on having a 'gap year' between high schoo...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
... regular basis. In addition, if someone spend time on travelling and working others w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07169811321 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.598233099 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558490566038 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.222700674 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233164858741 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952193634971 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633740832473 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140028322609 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850115885998 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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