some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays.
does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?
Employers, nowadays want to keep in touch with their employees on their off days. In this essay, I will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this development.
To begin with, in this competitive world all the companies have strict deadlines for different tasks. And to achieve goals, firms want to keep in touch with their staff even when they are on leave. This is best for the company's future development to provide the best service to clients to survive. For example, in an emergency, the help of an employee on holiday can be sought to tackle the situation.
On the other side, employees feel bound by this new nature of duty and the much-needed peace of mind is missing from their lives. Moreover, their mental health is also affected as their minds keep working even in free time. For instance, people go for vacations to relive their brain from stress of their daily routine and if the company keeps calling them even when they are relaxing at a faraway destination, then the sole motive behind going out is lost.
In conclusion, I think employees deserve some time off from work to refresh their mind hence avoid mental health conditions in the future even the work at the company suffers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Disadvantages
disadvantages of this development. To begin with, in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80107526882 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47146391604 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639784946237 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.416601664 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2222222222 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209503932981 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913277519789 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381142841235 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133641701998 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274164172574 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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