Some parents and teachers think that children’s behavior should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Modern age child-care is a very challenging job. Both guardians and pedagogues role is extremely crucial for the overall development of young-adults. Few caretakers opine that, it is necessary to be stern with children about their conduct while the others think conversely, that is children to be let free to behave. Both the viewpoints are discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs along with my thoughts on the same.
Children are always curious to know about everything around them, they see and absorb everything very easily, without differentiating good or bad. With the wide exposure to digital platform, today’s youngsters are prone to consume and imbibe many inappropriate content. Other reason is also the nuclear family setup in the urban cities with both the parents working. Thereby, it is necessary to closely monitor their actions and guide them accordingly. The classic example is the recently reported online suicide game wherein, across the world many children became victim of cyber crime and committed suicide.
On the other hand, freedom of thought, expression and action are the essential ingredients to become an independent adult. It is said that the ‘life is the best teacher’, when we let the children be themselves without any inhibitions and rules to follow, though they would make mistakes, the lesson learnt will be worth a lifetime.
Although, strict control over children’s manners is the need of the today's society due to larger digital exposure and small family brought up in the cities. Youngsters are forced to spend time alone, wherein there are a lot of distractions and the same can control the way they behave. But to have a child express him/her confidently and have their own perspective we should follow the uncontrolled parenting and teaching method.
I think that, having a right balance between being stern and lose is important. One rule fits all, that is generalized parenting or care taking rule cannot be applied here. Depending on the situation, adults will have to handle the situation and bring out the best from the children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 74, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
...ldren's manners is the need of the todays society due to larger digital exposure ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, conversely, if, so, while, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29080118694 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84727030661 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629080118694 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3579087694 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.882352941 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266180793694 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649745674515 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069001456702 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134814323049 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511247061127 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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