Some people think that studying from the past teaches us nothing about
today’s life. Others argue that the history is a valued source of information.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There have been different arguments over the possible impacts of history on the
modern society. While many people believe that information from the past has no
effect on today's generation, I would argue that it is reasonable to consider history
as a vital source of knowledge in the progression of the humanity.
On the one hand, it is thought that studying history is fruitless as it is merely a set
of past events. Firstly, in the ever-changing world, human activities now happen in
an entirely different manner compared to the past. Therefore, historical data and
experiences appear to play no role in decision making or predicting the future.
Secondly, there is no firm evidence for the accuracy of the historical information
due to people's biased judgments and lack of a data storage system. If some
information about the historical events were wrong, people would have an
incorrect understanding of the past society and culture.
On the other hand, I would side with those who think that history provides people
with an insight into their surroundings. In fact, history is an ongoing process in
which people are approaching a better world. For that reason, valuable
knowledge from history could enable individuals to be aware of their
unlimited potentials, resulting in more efforts to be made for the sustainable
development of human civilization. Besides, learning from the past could help
people to avoid making regretful mistakes. For example, if the US military had
thoroughly studied Vietnam's history of defending against foreign invasions,
they would have called off the Vietnam War, which took the lives of millions of
innocent people.
In conclusion, to some extent, although some arguments arise when gaining
knowledge about history is likely to bring no value to the society, it seems to me
that its ultimate benefits are significant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42333333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85014424586 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9872583361 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.153846154 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207547735782 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700492383497 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417627211898 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514108972089 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364374397379 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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