Some people believe that the best way to improve public health is by
increasing the number of sports facilities. Others think that this has little
effects and other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your
opinion
People have different views on how people can maintain and develop their
health. Some people think that having a great number of modern sports equipment
for the public is the best answer, while others believe that there are several
weaknesses to this way and they require other means. In my opinion, I strongly
believe that if people realize both of them together, they will receive the efficient
results.
There is no denying that regular exercise is essential in maintaining a healthy
body.in other words, thanks to doing exercises, people are able to burn a large
number of calories which helps to build healthy bones and muscles. In addition,
after a hard day at school or offices, everyone demands to release stress and get
energy for the new working day. It is suggested that the best way to achieve this is by
doing physical practices. For example, in the afternoons, individuals can walk
around the parks and can keep fit by using public facilities. As a result, the
government should distribute more free machines for their citizens.
On the other hand, it is argued that there are various other methods which have
direct effects on people’s body to improve their health. Having a balanced diet is
an instance. It means that people should consume nutritious food which consists of
vegetable without chemicals and fresh meat and fishes. Especially, one of the
impacts of an unhealthy diet is that the number of obesity is increasing rapidly
recently because of eating junk food with high fat. Therefore, if people have a
balanced diet, it can help people reduce a variety of diseases, such as diabetes,
high blood pressure, and heart attacks.
All in all, when people have a healthy diet and a positive lifestyle they can have a
long span life.
- Some people say that a person’s success is as a direct result of the way they were brought up by their parents. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people believe that educating children altogether will benefit them.Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given specialcourses. Discuss those two views 67
- In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Many old cities around the world are going through a major process of modernization What are the advantages and disadvantages of modernization 65
- Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person s decision making process Others feel that it has little or no real impact Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Health
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Message: Did you mean 'moderns'?
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Suggestion: Results
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Suggestion: Number
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Suggestion: Energy
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Suggestion: Around
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Suggestion: Direct
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Suggestion: An
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Suggestion: Long
... a positive lifestyle they can have a long span life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13087248322 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5045901737 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597315436242 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.506521758 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.214285714 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265289295683 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827748804843 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972447868184 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689499354336 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689001575538 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.