Some people believe that educating children altogether will benefit them.
Others think intelligent children should be taught separately and given special
courses. Discuss those two views
In recent decades, children education has been given higher weight by the general
public. Some people believe that it is crucial, beneficial to gather talented
students and offer them special courses. However, as every coin has two sides,
the pros and cons of this educational philosophy will be discussed in the
following essay.
On the one hand, it is not surprising that arranging gifted children with special
classes and giving special instruction would bring tremendous interests to
producing élite students. The nutrient environment which promotes geniuses’
progress toward success could be provided by this teaching method. In stark
contrast, when learning through the ordinary curriculum, the personal development
of prodigies are usually hampered. In this effort, talented children could facilitate
their learning progress by exchanging knowledge and experience with their same
peers.
On the other hand, this teaching method has some drawbacks that should be taken
into consideration. In particular, it would foster depression, frustration amongst
slow students. Treating differently can drive ordinary students to feel a sense of
elimination and worthlessness. As a consequence, low-achievers could cast doubt
on their effort which leads to the lower performance and the lower record in
school. Furthermore, this arrangement can twist children’s perception of their
ability and potentially cause negative effects on their life afterwards.
In conclusion, it is a dilemma to evaluate the advantages and disadvantages of
teaching separately, differently intelligent students. Although this way can bring a
nutritious environment to the personal development of high-achievers, the feeling
of discrimination and other detrimental results should be taken into account
educators seriously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, in conclusion, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.22307692308 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2438631181 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619230769231 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1327656823 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183110816359 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572770347944 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529102282127 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464553422664 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536837436025 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.8 12.4159519038 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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