Some people think that the government is responsible for looking after the elderly. Others believe that it should be family members. Who do you think should take responsibility?
Taking care of senior people is a debatable issue nowadays. Although some think it is the government obligation to look after the elderly, other claims taking care of senior members is the duty of family members. I, however, believe that it is a responsibility of both.
The government plays an integral role in taking charge of senior citizens by increasing pension years. If any elderly do not have offspring to look after them at least the government pension will be there to survive, which is the premium right of everyone. As a result, they do not tend to open hands in front of their relative just for the sake of living. Besides this, higher authorities should build hospitals, and provide a free nursing home for elderly in order to look after them in the form of well-equipped machines, qualified and trained nurses to deal with mobility problems in geriatric.
Apart from the aforementioned view, I think the family is also to be blamed to take care of their elders because at one time they were the only ones for their children to support, motivate and impart unconditional love. So it would be a small amount for their children to look after their elders when they are in need. Family love and affection is the sheer thing, which deters the elderly from feeling lonely and consequently, they feel happy and joyous just by seeing their offspring in front of them. No amount of money can render such happiness as they get from their family members. Moreover, children can set an example for their future generation by taking care of seniors at home so that their kids do not leave them in nursing homes but let them stay at home only.
In conclusion, although some believe taking care of the elderly is the duty of the government, others are of the school of thought that it is the responsibility of family members. I, however, believe that it should be the joint responsibility of the government and family by providing well-equipped facilities, and creating a good ambience at home for the elderly to feel blissful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from, at least, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77840909091 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67325620684 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488636363636 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2649210109 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.142857143 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33737125929 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125043978446 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089660591783 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245332146952 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107126369961 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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