According to some, accepted behavior of difficulties, including unexpected job or miserable living conditions is ideal, whereas others moot that they should make great effort to overcome obstacles and qualify their lives. In my view, the ambition to strive and develop ourselves to reach higher levels have bigger contributions to our society as well as our families. This essay will discuss, how unfavorable circumstances affects a family living, and why one should always push itself to raise its socio economic status in the present competitive world.
Many people satisfy with their dismal status although they have never had desire for it when they were younger. I believe this will hamper their growth towards their career path and will lead to an uncertain future. For example, students who have been under the age of 23-30 years, found to attempt suicide due to low salary and long working hours jobs as they did not study earlier when they were in their high school. This makes them pessimistic and perceive that the journey to their success is over and they cannot do anything to improve this.
However, there is a massive number of optimistic individuals who have been struggling hard, continue expanding their abilities and never give up. They devote seamless efforts to achieve their aspirations and bring happiness in their families too. For this reason, I would agree that every individual should believe in itself and always tries to push hard to face difficulties of life and attain greater heights of success. For instance, in the developed countries, there are many overseas pupils who attempts to undertake part time jobs along with studies for the sake of meeting their living expenses instead of receiving funds from their families. This makes them more confident and adaptable to live in foreign countries.
In conclusion, for the one who wants to reach at the greater levels of triumph, one should always seek to improve its circumstances by putting religious efforts towards their goals and earn a good living standard. That being said, the successful people are those who believe that they can change obstacles into strength and can conquer any tough challenges.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 89
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 61
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are some more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 93
- You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,introduce yourselfexplain what experience and special skills you havetell him/her when you think you could start 56
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are some more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...erseas pupils who attempts to undertake part time jobs along with studies for the sake of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16246498599 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50968824763 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616246498599 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6443028266 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.642857143 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0717370771512 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262434571696 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0197890344078 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470376908964 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143060072561 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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