It is irrefutable that urban cities have been accelerating rapidly since the development of technology. Thus, Many people hold opinion that it becomes arduous to dwell in metro city whereas other people believe that city life has become uncomplicated due to myriads of opportunities. This essay intends to delve into both side. I personally agree with latter side.
There are manifold reason why such people think it is intricate to live in city. To begin with, pollution is one of the major concern to live in city. It has been augmenting at alarming rate which can be perilous for human beings. Scientists have also warned that contaminated surroundings can cause contagious ailments which may have adverse effects on civilians. Furthermore, dearness is also a prominent factor which had ruined many life of ordinary people in yesteryears. Inflation rate is also increased every year that can cause numerous difficulties to spend whole life in metropolitan city for substandard people.
On the contrary, there is a group of people who believe that city life proffers myriads of advantages due to various facilities such as healthcare system, education, employment. Firstly, Improved medical care and health infrastructure brings immense benefits for all people. Nowadays it becomes straightforward to get medical aid at any time in cities due to government's expenditure on healthcare system. Secondly, any helpless resident have more opportunities to procure employment in metro city. Many corporations have established manufacturing plant in city area which brings more jobs for city residents. Thus, many people prefer to live exquisite life in city where they spend their life without any difficulties.
To recapitulate, I acknowledge that there are some inimical problems that needs to be consider but city offers manifold of amenities which succors residents to dwell their life perfectly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: much; little
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun life seems to be countable; consider using: 'many lives'.
Suggestion: many lives
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46101694915 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.029727272 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0363972457 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7647058824 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201291601299 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580291830927 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638053358042 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120682378435 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711627751998 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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