Becoming successful in sports has become a trending topic of debate. it is argued by some individuals that to achieve success in sports the only thing one needs is inherited capability whereas others opine that diligence and perseverance can work well. According to me, though inbuilt capacity is much needed but hardships and determination are highly contributing factors to excel in sports. The upcoming paragraphs will cast a light on both viewpoints before embarking on conclusion.
Firstly, physical as well as mental strength plays a vital role while playing any sports such as football, cricket and so forth. having inbuilt strength is like icing on cake in sports because sports is not only confined to physical ability but one has to be an all-rounder. if a person is already fit then he can stay more focused on gaming strategy rather than taking care of physical strength. Another factor to it is that being naturally fit can offer you a lot of benefits such as if a person is naturally of long height then one can easily achieve success in basketball by taking advantage of one's natural ability. For example, Satnam Singh a young boy from India is directly selected by "The National Basketball Association" due to his unusual height.
on the contrary, someone has rightly said- "Practice makes men perfect". Therefore , dogged determination and daily practice can help to build stamina that a sports person required. With lots of hard work, one can achieve great heights in sports. For instance, Milkha Singh, an eminent personality in sports though, is of average height and normal physique but with rigorous practice and hard work he achieved the title of Flying Sikh' by outperforming in Olympics and won a gold medal. Hence, it is evident that mere having inbuild stamina is not only needed but with regular practice one can achieve whatever he wants.
To conclude, having analyzed both viewpoints in my point of view, besides natural ability one can excel with practice and determination as it builds stamina and confidence in the person to achieve success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12209302326 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82725951149 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1597546006 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.466666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136520736575 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478084697158 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359776063425 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928831194311 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169754769675 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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