Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community. Do you agree or disagree?
A significant number of people consider that all the criminals do not deserve to be placed inside a jail, they should perform tasks and help society without anything to be paid for it. In my opinion, I agree that some criminals should have an opportunity to improve their lives through community jobs.
Volunteer tasks in the community for some offenders are useful for them as well as for the society in various ways. Working in the society will improve their skills and allow them to learn new things as well, which they can use in future after completing their punishments. In addition to that, different tasks of society can be completed without any cost of the government. For instance, cleaning and hygiene activities in jail duration can help prisoners to obtain jobs in municipality work after completion of their verdict.
Another factor is improvement their social behaviour and attitude, Working on a community level will give them a platform to talk and discuss issues with other workers and daily routine of such activity will enhance their confidence to work in the society. For example, daily tasks will make their routine habits and working with others will give team skills and a sense of understanding the difference between right and wrong activities.
In conclusion, some lawbreakers should be given a chance to improve themselves by incorporating them into unpaid community tasks. In this way, the offender can learn some sort of skills which they can use in upcoming opportunities as well as improve their behaviour and understanding, as well as the society, will also develop with such approach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 529, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...work after completion of their verdict. Another factor is improvement their soci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08239700375 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73366165764 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546816479401 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.8619248431 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.7 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232392075441 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102344330997 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849127590221 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158861165005 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108524222705 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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