Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
With increasing economy and customer's demand, we have several options in the market. Although a section of people believes this change as demerit for the society, the merits are far more appreciated by other people. Undoubtedly, I accord with this notion that availability of multiple choices for a particular item outweigh the negatives.
Earlier, for particular items only a few manufacturers were present in the market. As a result, the price of the products were decided by the manufactures as per their profit targets. Consumers had no control over price of products as they were helpless because of shortage of options. For instance, during 90's only two manufactures were available for TV- Sony and Videocon. Customers had paid thousands of rupees for basic TV. After the introduction of other manufacturer like BPL, MicroMax, Samsung etc. in the market, the prices of TVs were drastically reduced. Moreover, producers invest more on their research and development to attract the consumers and to maintain the market share. Because of several choices, product quality has automatically improved.
However, with the increasing choices, consumers are in a confuse state of mind. Now-a-days, it is very difficult for consumers to buy a product as multiple options are available with small rate variation, which lead to more time consumption while purchasing any items. In addition, product selling platforms are not limited to shops after the introduction of e-commerce selling, which fuels the confusion of buyers to even more worst level.
To sum up, even though demerits are present after having various options for a product, the merits are far more effective for consumers. Because of competition in the markets, prices are in controlled, product quality has improved, and more satisfaction after purchasing although much time is needed in choosing a product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...he increasing choices, consumers are in a confuse state of mind. Now-a-days, it is very d...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'worst' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: worst
...h fuels the confusion of buyers to even more worst level. To sum up, even though demeri...
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Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'more the worst'.
Suggestion: more the worst
...h fuels the confusion of buyers to even more worst level. To sum up, even though demeri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3843537415 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91623576278 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0032490906 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1176470588 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.081790502054 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291932663772 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295582409409 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590158484691 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411830550303 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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