Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?
In the old days, people needed to be satisfied with few options which there were in the world. I believe that having advancements in technology, day after day they will have to make more decisions to choose for something in any area of their lives.
First of all, thinking about possessions, it can be seen that every day, companies are releasing consumer goods to all kinds of public. They bet in aggressive advertisements that catch consumers' attention and make them buy items that are not even necessary. For example, cars, electronic devices, appliances, all of them have a range of brands, model, color, and size. It is quite hard to decide which items fit well with their personality in front of so many types.
Some tough personal decisions become harder with this great variety. For instance, students struggle with choosing a career because besides the fact they are too young yet, there are lots of professions that mix some functions or skills among each other. Another example is toward people who want to follow a religion, because they may feel lost due to many religions that exist everywhere. Places to hang out, friends or relationships, lifestyles, all people need to make a choice accordingly to their personality and background.
To conclude, the number of choices that people make during their lives is increasing steadily. I think that this phenomenon tends to get worse with globalization. People should be careful about their choices, prioritizing those that are relevant to their lives and make them feel better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, first, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71011320275 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639215686275 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2549019255 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3846153846 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123112701607 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419954349991 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239297983116 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740769031644 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276058045852 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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