Some people believe that one family should have one car and encourage them to use alternative source. Agree/Disagree
There is no doubt that digitization has taken the technology to new heights, and the inventions have made the human life easier. Cars are the one of these inventions which has not only made life comfortable, but has also made the travelling faster. These days, keeping more than one car has become trend whereas some intellectuals suggest that it is better to keep only one car. In my opinion, it is in the favor of society to keep not more than one car.
Undoubtedly, traffic congestion is one of the major issues in front of the governments these days, and cars are creating this issue more complex. Government can encourage people to use public transport instead of using their own vehicle. This will not only solve the traffic congestion but also resolve the problem of pollution. Moreover, public transports are much cheaper method of travelling; this will further lead the natives to save money.
In addition to this, it has observed that people use car more often have higher chances to get obese. It is essential to encourage citizens to use methods like; walking, cycling to travel. Recent research has revealed, people who travel short distance, walking or by cycling are more fit in comparison to the denizens who use car.
In the end, it can be concluded that promoting different sources of transportation and encouraging nationalists to avoid keeping more than one car can help the society as well as the whole nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8893442623 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65037849771 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553278688525 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.941243801 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259454129692 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968114924001 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595584807945 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148263770371 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388017372285 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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