Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
Discuss the advantage of both methods and give your own opinion
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Teaching children at home was a trend which was very much traceable across history in all the royal lineages as well as affluent families, the primary reason being, that they felt their child could learn much more, if special focus and attention was provided. This is nothing new and is very much reminiscent with our history. However, in the current century, that we live in, teaching children at home, apart from the attention and focus aspect, ensures that they are in a more safeguarded environment, with a much tailored to suit the child academic schedule and a much more flexible approach to studies. It helps the child develop a sense of security and is more versatile.
As an evidence to support the above, my friend’s daughter, has private tuitions and her academic schedule is more customized towards what she likes and shows an interest in. Her daughter is a good dancer and participates regularly in reality shows being hosted and hence, unlike others of her age, she doesn’t have time to go to school and hence takes private tuitions. Her private tuitions are more angled towards improving her social skills, art forms like dance & music and thankfully, her parents with a much broader aspect, have burdened her with less number of redundant subjects.
Be that as it may, I personally feel, a child’s development is much more varied, rounded and complete, when they go to school. Old fashioned as it may sound, but, psychologists and researchers indicate, more the child is exposed to the society, better it imbibes, grows and matures. Maturity levels, coping with failures are much better and more pronounced in children who go to school, rather than, learning at home. The children tend to meet and interact with lot of other children, learn inter-personal skills, learn to respect orders and discipline themselves, when they interact with their teachers and learn to handle victories and losses in a more dignified way.
Though all the above mentioned facets of child development is not limited only by going to school, they are definitely more pronounced and rounded in children who are made to attend school along with little children of their age, rather than children who take private tuitions. The weightage is more shifted towards children going to school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 510, Rule ID: A_MUCH_NN1[1]
Message: Maybe you should omit the article "a", leaving only 'much'.
Suggestion: much
...in a more safeguarded environment, with a much tailored to suit the child academic sch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07915567282 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65799765304 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543535620053 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4824302058 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.076923077 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1538461538 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149156221137 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669115199415 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501599702111 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105858093045 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556413453722 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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