Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it’s important for a children to go to school.
Discuss the opinion and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own advantage or experience.
Some people would argue that adolescents should be educated in school, while others argue that home-schooling is a better method. This essay will argue that despite the fact that it provides flexibility in learning, I believe it causes stress for working parents.
On the one hand, home education is flexible and allows teenagers to learn at their pace. In other words, course structure can be altered as per child’s learning capability, like additional hours can be dedicated towards subjects they find hard to study than allotting similar hours for all topics. For instance, I had opted for homeschooling and it helped to learn subjects at my pace, I took more hours to understand mathematics and physics while chemistry and biology I dedicated fewer hours. This kind of learning helped me to strengthen my foundation understanding of basics. However, I believe that teaching-parent may not be as skilled in all subject discipline, which may result in poor learning.
On the other hand, there is a high level of stress among parents since they are required to juggle with work and also act as a tutor for their kids. This is to say that they often have to multi-task which causes fatigue and thereafter leads to burning them out. Burn out is mental and psychological stress caused by long working hours and has a detrimental effect on the health of human beings. For example, as per a survey conducted by Wired Magazine, 45% of North Americans agreed to the fact that additional responsibilities reduce their personal time which affects their work productivity. I believe, studying in brick and mortar schools is a viable option as they have trained professionals to teach and handle children.
In conclusion, although schooling from home enables students to learn at his speed and given time, it exerts additional workload and pressure on mother and father.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08441558442 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85898700815 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3956358467 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.461538462 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176728038688 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058583944114 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428189605889 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102467893298 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374397861622 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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