Nowadays many people work from home. Some think it is beneficial, while others think it may distract the family routine. What is your opinion?
In moderns days, people struggle to keep a perfect work-life balance. Whereas many believe that it is advantageous to work from home, others argue that this approach may create a disturbance in personal schedule. I vehemently support the former view for some empirical reasons.
To begin with, those who support the latter view may consider that working from the home may result in turbulence between personal and professional time. This is because when people operate from home, they have to be active all the time as their employers often reach out to them anytime for the updates and support as, the working hours are not decided when we work from home. For instance, usual office hours are 9 AM to 6 PM and often, employers do not expect their employees to work beyond 6, which is not a case while working from the home. If a person chooses to work from home permanently, it would drastically impacts his personal time. This would results in unnecessary family tension and may cause mental disturbance.
On the contrary, I believe that the prime benefit of working from home is that an individual can work at his\her own pace. Unlike the office, waking up early in the morning is not required as a person can decide their work schedule as per their routine, which further allows them to spend long quality time with their family. The main need is to prepare a proper schedule for working hours rather than working randomly whenever required, and this also enhance their productivity. This way of living would also develop a great bond between family members.To exemplify, If an employees' personal life is healthy, the productivity would automatically goes up.
In conclusion, although it is a daunting process for many people to balance their time between family and office when they work from home which put them into family crisis, freedom to work as per our lifestyle and staying with loved-ones all the time, in my opinion, are the perks of this system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an employee' or simply 'employees'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88955223881 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51991223544 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546268656716 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4960745187 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241647444681 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989193838513 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545472801471 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168853906907 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507113018856 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.