Some people believe that technology has made man more social.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some individuals opine that technology has helped today's generation to become more social. Nowadays, technology became vital part of each and everyone's life. I strongly agreed with the notion that it helps to connect people round the globe. This essay will elucidate further based on supporting examples.
There are a myraid of reasons which shows that with the immense advancement in technologies, people has become more inteactive but the most preponderant is numerous opportunities for each individuals in every sector. Now, with the help of internet, people are exploring various options with regards to businesses, jobs, studies and tourism. For example, because of one of technology boom which is internet, anyone can apply for jobs to any other countries regardless any boundary. Moreover, students can also apply for higher studies to world top class universities without any barrier. On top of that they can check reviews, fees structure and compare with other universities easily.
Another pivotal point is that because of smartphones, now people can interact with anyone via video call or audio call which were not possible 20 years ago. Consequently, they do not have to wait for meetings as smartphone help to work as a bridge using vitural meetings. Also, it takes friction of seconds to talk face to face virtually and to take decisions based on any conditions. For example, one of social networking website namely Facebook, provide platform to talk with strangers and it has been seen that these platforms, helped youngster to find their soulmate also.
In conclusion, based on above mentioned points, one can conclude that booming in technologies, help every section of the society to get more opportunities, which was not possible few decades ago.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 572, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...helped youngster to find their soulmate also. In conclusion, based on above menti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29432624113 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79127574069 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7294099588 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163873525609 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05973257169 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505615411642 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102378121998 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709468503385 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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