Some organizations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

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Some organizations integrate employees in decision making process of their goods and services. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

It is said that the employees are the backbone of the companies. The question whether the organizations should integrate employees in the decision-making process is highly contentious. Every decision has their own pros and cons but the decision with the intellectual decision with must be implemented after a decent discussion. This essay will elaborate on the pros and cons of the relevant arguments and examples.

There are myriads of examples which can elucidate further that participation of the employees help the organizations to augment significantly. The preponderant one is that it enhances motivation level amidst employees which help them to invest their each and every effort more positively and efficiently. Consequently, employees take more pain to make the organization successful. Similarly, the ground staff has more knowledge and experiences of direct customers or suppliers. So, they can guide more correctly to the organization for the loopholes and how to solve those concern while keeping in mind in the broader way. Coordination between employees and employers lead to a more comfortable environment which helps both to prosper further

In spite of their advantages, sometimes it creates utter chaos at some certitude levels. Employees who represent the group of people can present wrong information while passing to their supervisors, however, correctness and authentication of the information need to check ethically so that no wrong decisions can be implemented by companies. Moreover, more cross-checking should be implemented while taking serious and massive decisions.

In conclusion, on the basis of the above-mentioned points, one can conclude that involving employees in decision making can lead to providing more authentic and prosper organization but indispensable steps need to take while implementing those suggestions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "The question"?
Suggestion: Whether
...yees are the backbone of the companies. The question whether the organizations should integrate empl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, similarly, so, then, while, in conclusion, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73285198556 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33956677998 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 379.143842365 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2587875595 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.153846154 104.977214359 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.9669160288 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245350656372 0.242375264174 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923340415005 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804391275076 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150159179252 0.151781067708 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734917032342 0.0609392437508 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 12.6369458128 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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