Some people believe that technology has made man more sociable and others think that it has made us less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Certain individuals agree the advancement o=in technology is served as a medium for social interaction among people, whereas, others have this notion the development in technology has widen the gap of communication in the society. In my opinion, I do believe the development of technology has paved a way for people to be more extrovert and socially active.
Some people have this notion that with the advancements in technology such as computers is affecting the younger generation of the society. To be more precise, children do not interact with other people or indulge in any physical activities like playing cricket, football and badminton instead spend most of their time on computers playing video games or watching movies. Furthermore, excess use of technology deprives of real human interaction, which is an important aspect for building a strong bond between people. To illustrate, World Health Organisation in 2018 stated that more the 50% of the young generations suffers from many health issues such as obesity, diabetic problems and weak eyesight because of involving in activities like playing online games on play station, mobile phones and
However, many individuals have this opinion that the use of internet facilities and many social networking applications has made possible for people to interact with their loved ones and friends living in any part of the world. Simply stating, it has removed the geographical boundaries and individuals can interact with their family member anytime and from any place. Moreover, hi-tech applications has extended the global market of business as organisations can sell their products in any part of the world To elucidate, social networking websites like Facebook, Skype and Twitter has made it easy for people to talk to their family members sharing their ideas, feeling and emotions.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that modern technology has made individuals to be more interactive as well as build a strong communication and bond among the humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
...otion the development in technology has widen the gap of communication in the society...
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Line 3, column 798, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...games on play station, mobile phones and However, many individuals have this opin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, so, well, whereas, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35849056604 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89940517586 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544025157233 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.238598119 49.4020404114 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.333333333 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.3333333333 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.44444444444 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154466046673 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728595934282 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045261829014 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103413414916 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278627073832 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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