Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both views and give your own opinions
Where there is no crime there is no law, there is no crime otherwise there would exist increase in crime rate and diverse kinds of culprits. However, forms of crime should be punished as believed by most people while other believed that issues of life and reasons should be considered to temper punishment. The views and opinion of the above-mentioned would be discussed.
Crime is a product of an intention either positive or negative which can’t stand on the fence. This is monitored in countries like South Africa where crime rates are the highest in the world irrespective of the reason why it’s executed.
Implementation of these intentions should be investigated accurately because most crimes have been committed with good intentions whereby some are results of circumstances such as poverty, environment, parenting and peer pressure. The economy keeps integrating in terms of population, items are becoming not affordable and many are going hungry with respect to the bad situation in the country. In respect to this, many feels that the best way to survive is to commit some such as theft, burglary invasion, pick pocketing so they can meet up with daily survival. However, most of these crimes as given as example should be punished within the confinement of the circumstances.
Contrary to the above, it’s expected to uphold the law of mosses which states “a teeth for a teeth and an eye for an eye” irrespective of the situation and reason surrounding the offense, provided it can be found in the law of the nation, it punishable and most be deemed fit without sentiment. Furthermore, this type of thought as believed by some people reduces the crime and put new set of people with such intentions under measure.
Conclusively, my opinion upholds the fact that crimes should be punished within the confinement of the circumstances with motivation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a tooth' or simply 'teeth'?
Suggestion: a tooth; teeth
...ld the law of mosses which states 'a teeth for a teeth and an eye for an eye'...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, while, such as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16558441558 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91629116763 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.4416040489 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.583333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345339898348 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127629401891 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893552774568 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190958405215 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660696985317 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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