Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people arguing that there should be fixed punishment for each crime. As Such, there are merits and demerits to this trend that sentencing should be predefined for a particular crime, although I am of the opinion that the latter outdo the former. In this essay, I will discuss both the views and will also give my opinion at the end.
On the one hand, those who believe sentencing should be fixed for a crime might argue that this would make Punishments more effective. For Example, if a murderer finds guilty for this mistake, the judge just needs to refer to the punishment for murder and sentence the person. In contrast, if there are no fixed punishments for a crime, it will cost the government both money and time. As a result, this money could be spent on healthcare and education.
On the other hand, my view is that taking the situation and the reason for the crime into consideration is important because it can help the judge to understand the circumstances and give their judgment. The reason for this is that there can be some kind of blackmailing or manipulations to make the victim do the crime. For Instance, if murder is able to prove that he had been manipulated into commuting the crime, he should get less sentence than the other who is self-motivated for the crime. If instead, fixed punishments were implemented, this kind of flexibility will be lost.
In conclusion, Despite a fixed punishment system that can save a lot of time and money, it is my firm belief that crimes need to be assessed based on the circumstance and motive before giving any judgment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72203389831 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69905023354 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.520516494 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.083333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396506941902 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162263402082 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876174813594 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251948316128 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576672537292 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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